Bean bags for hire, 3pts For the Whole day

Walt: persuade the reader to agree with our message.

Bean bags are delightful,relaxful and comfortable to sit on.

During class time the comfortable bean bags are available for hire to sit on. Instead

of sitting on the Boring floor or on a cold hard chair, you will be able to sit on the bean bag to do your Work And Plus you could do anything on it  (well not anything).

The bean bags are filled with Comfy and soft beans and covered in a Flexible skin. They can be moulded into the shape of your choice. You can choose to sit on the bean bag, or use it to lean back on.

The comfortable bean bags only have 2 colours, A sea blue and Grassy green. Well It is your colour of choice With the comfy Bean bags.

The Fair Price is 3pt. If you reward yourself with a bean bag, You will have the bean bag for rest of the day. once at the beginning of the day and then you can use the beanbag!!!!!

Everyone Remember for 3pt you can sit On a comfortable bean bag For the Whole Day.

The task was to recraft a Writing that our teacher wrote. We had to write and Recraft The Paragraph. I had Help by using the thesaurus to only think of new words.