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Friday 25 September 2015

Goodbye

Today is the last day of term 3 so I would like to say Goodbye for 2 week.
My  Highlights for this term was learning More Maths and Reading. Also Learning Te Reo Maori.

Thursday 17 September 2015

My Animation


Sulieti Movie from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.
Hi This is my movie about Feelings
In team 4  we have been learning about what Trade and Enterprize.
In my animation i have walking and walking. I saw a wallet.
To Listen More about it Click on It.
Hope you Enjoy.

Wednesday 16 September 2015

Onomatopoeia


WALT:  We are learning to use onomatopoeia to help create interest in our writing


The Task was to draw a Onomatopoeia word.
I learnt what the Meaning of Onomatopoeia.
A onomatopoeia is a when a word Like Cat Makes a Sound. For Example the sound of cat Makes Meow. 

When The Door Gets Slam Really loud you can here it go BAM.



Tuesday 15 September 2015

The Market Day

Walt: write an interesting and detailed recount.


Have you ever Had a Market Day at your School Or Class Room before? Well Team 4 did. Read on to find out more about the Market Day.
The reason Why we are having our Marking Day because our topic is Trade and Enterprise. Also because we have been Making product for the past few weeks. I was In custom Stationery Group. Me and my Business Partners Waimaria, Patricia and Aliyah were Making Name Labels For Netbook, or Tot Trays.
The Market had Started everyone was so Happy. Me, Waimaria and Aliyah at the same time we were Delivering and Buying. As i walked Pass I saw all the other product Like Candles, Soap, Loom Bands and More. I saw a Ice Block in a cup that the Kitchen people made. s i walked past and Thought should I buy it and I did.
I Offered to do all the Delivering. We only Had 1 Hour Left to go and still didn't Deliver I Tried my Best to look for the People that ordered our name labels. I saw Aliyah and ask her to help me, We did it together and had Heaps of Pts.
My Highlights about the Market was when we Delivered the name labels  Just in time. My Feelings about the Markets is everyone had enjoyed it.

Recount Writing

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Write for my reader
I've tried to think about my reader
My writing shows some awareness of reader because my writing is quite clear and I have tried to interest my reader.
My writing is easy to understand and I have tried to tell the reader what it was like to be there by giving details and my thoughts.
My writing really considers audience as reader because I have kept their interest and made them feel like they know exactly what it was like for me.
Purpose
I tried to meet the purpose
My text goes some way towards meeting the purpose
The message is clear in some parts of the recount.
My text fully meets the purpose.
The message is clear all through the recount.
Introduction
My introduction does not yet clearly orientate or hook in my reader.
My introduction gets some buy in from audience and they can understand what I am going to write about.
My introduction hooks in my reader and it is clear what I am writing about.
My introduction wows my reader!
Paragraph Topics
My paragraphs are confused and don't follow my plan.
I have tried to follow my plan.
Most my paragraphs are about 1 big idea and I have added some detail.
My paragraphs have some complex as well as simple sentences. Post paragraphs give details about 1 big idea.
I have followed the paragraph topic in my plan.
My paragraphs have complex and simple sentences. Paragraphs all give details about 1 big idea.

This Morning our task was to write a recount about what happened on Friday

The WALT is Our WALT is write an interesting and detailed recount.
Hope you enjoy my Writng.

Wednesday 9 September 2015

Sulieti's Adventurous Adverbs

WALT:  We are learning about adverbs and how to use them effectively.


The task was to Writing about Adventurous Adverbs
I made up my own Adventurous Adverbs on a Google Slide.
I made The girl Shoots, The Dog Swims, The Girls Whawhai ( Fights) and The People Skates.
Hope You enjoy my Work.

Trade Fair

Walt: use language that paints a picture in the mind of our reader.
This Term Our Topic Is Trade and Enterprise. Team 4 has been Creating and Selling the Product they have been Making.
A Trade Fair is when you create your product and start selling It or Order it. You would Get a Chance to See other people Product and if you want you can order it. First You would chose What colour you would want it. Then you can Tell other Information what you want on the product.
There Were 6 different groups The Homeware, Toys, Kitchen, Jewelry, Custom stationery And Music. I was in the Custom Stationery Group and the Product We made was Name Labels. Each Group had to make a product.
There were only 30 minutes because we only had the last Block

we only had 30 minutes to sell and Ordering. Me, Patricia and Waimaria Were in 1 Group. The First 15 Minutes First Me And Patricia had to go Buy and Order what we wanted. Waimaria Would Stay and Make orders For The Kids.
As i Forgot we a having a Big market fair on week 8. I am every excited because we will get to see other kids Products and having FUN!!!.


The task was to write about what happened at the trade fair.
We are learning to use language that paints a picture in the our Reader. I have told you about what happened. Hope You Enjoyed my Writing

Thursday 3 September 2015

Dogs

Walt: use our inferencing skills to find meaning in the text.
Adjective: dirty
Noun: Dogs
Verb: digg
Adverb: dangerously

Our task was to make up a adjective, Noun, verb and Ad verb.
i learnt how to write adjective, Noun, verb and And verb into Poems.
Hope you Like it.

Tuesday 1 September 2015

Job Application


The task was to make a Job Application to get jobs.
we had to explane what 3 skills we have, why im the best person for the job,Previous experience and The job you a Apply for.