My Movie

Well this term our topic is Survivals and in team 4 we are learning about adaptation.As you can see the camel is walking thought the desert. then its walking through antarctica in the cold night.
Sulieti's movie from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

My Intro

Walt: think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.

San Diego Zoo has lot’s of awesome animals. - Bungy Jumpers A virtual tour of a zoo is such a cool experience. - Hokey Pokeys I learnt a lot about animals from this website. - Paua Shells Virtual tours of a zoo isn’t as fun as a real zoo. - Whitebait fritters

Plan of my paragraph topics

1. Introduction	Orientates and hooks
2. Body Paragraph 1	Teacher Explained What we are going to do
3. Body Paragraph 2	Watching the Animals, explaining about how cool the Penguins were.
4. Body Paragraph 3	What will it be  like to go to San diego zoo.
5. Conclusion	What I think about the San Diego Zoo

Awesome Animals,Roaring and making loud Noises yeah i'm talking about the Zoo. I have been on a Virtual tour but It sucks because it is just not the same as the  real tour. If you want to find out more about this Please read on.

Many Animals at the zoo is just awesome but sometimes you would want to visit the zoo. This Week i have been on a Virtual Tour exploring other animals at San Diego zoo. Have you ever Been to San diego zoo or have just explored where there are awesome animals are?

This week we have been exploring Other Animal. We had to 

rewrite our Intro again. In our 

class we Had to write about San 

deigo zoo. 

Hope you like my Intro.

Camels

WALT: research Animals and their adaptations.

My Chosen animal is a Camel. 
Camels have a lot of adaptations that allow them to Live Longer. A camel can go a week or more without water and they can last for several months without food. They adapted in Deserts.

The Market Day

Walt: write an interesting and detailed recount. Have you ever Had a Market Day at your School Or Class Room before? Well Team 4 did. Read on to find out more about the Market Day. The reason Why we are having our Marking Day because our topic is Trade and Enterprise. Also because we have been Making product for the past few weeks. I was In custom Stationery Group. Me and my Business Partners Waimaria, Patricia and Aliyah were Making Name Labels For Netbook, or Tot Trays. The Market had Started everyone was so Happy. Me, Waimaria and Aliyah at the same time we were Delivering and Buying. As i walked Pass I saw all the other product Like Candles, Soap, Loom Bands and More. I saw a Ice Block in a cup that the Kitchen people made. s i walked past and Thought should I buy it and I did. I Offered to do all the Delivering. We only Had 1 Hour Left to go and still didn't Deliver I Tried my Best to look for the People that ordered our name labels. I saw Aliyah and ask her to help me, We did it together and had Heaps of Pts. My Highlights about the Market was when we Delivered the name labels  Just in time. My Feelings about the Markets is everyone had enjoyed it. Recount Writing 1 2 3 4 Write for my reader I've tried to think about my reader My writing shows some awareness of reader because my writing is quite clear and I have tried to interest my reader. My writing is easy to understand and I have tried to tell the reader what it was like to be there by giving details and my thoughts. My writing really considers audience as reader because I have kept their interest and made them feel like they know exactly what it was like for me. Purpose I tried to meet the purpose My text goes some way towards meeting the purpose The message is clear in some parts of the recount. My text fully meets the purpose. The message is clear all through the recount. Introduction My introduction does not yet clearly orientate or hook in my reader. My introduction gets some buy in from audience and they can understand what I am going to write about. My introduction hooks in my reader and it is clear what I am writing about. My introduction wows my reader! Paragraph Topics My paragraphs are confused and don't follow my plan. I have tried to follow my plan. Most my paragraphs are about 1 big idea and I have added some detail. My paragraphs have some complex as well as simple sentences. Post paragraphs give details about 1 big idea. I have followed the paragraph topic in my plan. My paragraphs have complex and simple sentences. Paragraphs all give details about 1 big idea. This Morning our task was to write a recount about what happened on Friday The WALT is Our WALT is write an interesting and detailed recount. Hope you enjoy my Writng.

Trade Fair

Walt: use language that paints a picture in the mind of our reader.

This Term Our Topic Is Trade and Enterprise. Team 4 has been Creating and Selling the Product they have been Making.

A Trade Fair is when you create your product and start selling It or Order it. You would Get a Chance to See other people Product and if you want you can order it. First You would chose What colour you would want it. Then you can Tell other Information what you want on the product.

There Were 6 different groups The Homeware, Toys, Kitchen, Jewelry, Custom stationery And Music. I was in the Custom Stationery Group and the Product We made was Name Labels. Each Group had to make a product.

There were only 30 minutes because we only had the last Block

we only had 30 minutes to sell and Ordering. Me, Patricia and Waimaria Were in 1 Group. The First 15 Minutes First Me And Patricia had to go Buy and Order what we wanted. Waimaria Would Stay and Make orders For The Kids.

As i Forgot we a having a Big market fair on week 8. I am every excited because we will get to see other kids Products and having FUN!!!.

The task was to write about what happened at the trade fair.

We are learning to use language that paints a picture in the our Reader. I have told you about what happened. Hope You Enjoyed my Writing

Dogs

Walt: use our inferencing skills to find meaning in the text.

Adjective: dirty

Noun: Dogs

Verb: digg

Adverb: dangerously

Our task was to make up a adjective, Noun, verb and Ad verb.
i learnt how to write adjective, Noun, verb and And verb into Poems.
Hope you Like it.

Can you guess what it is?

Walt: use our inferencing skills to find meaning in the text.
This is a one slide presention about making our poems.
Me and my buddy Adriel Made a poem about one thing but i turned out to be the other.
The task was to make up a poem with your buddy.
I learnt how to make up our own Poems.

Jeffas Chocolate

Walt: use language that paints a picture in the mind of our reader.

Cadbury Chocolate Is Tasty and delicious, I could eat it everyday.

New Cadbury’s Chocolate Jeffas is a large size.

It Cost $3.50 at countdown but it's more expensive at the other super markets.

When I first saw the New Jeffas chocolate it looked Yummy.

Smelling the chocolate it reminds me how I always use to eat chocolate.

Touching the chocolate I can think how it would be melting in my mouth.

Feeling the taste of the orange dots I could feel The texture of Jeffas.

The chocolate

I wouldnt have to improve anything but just 1.

I Love The jeffas chocolate but think you should improve More Jeffas in the Chocolate. Only because there are no that much jeffas in the chocolate.

Overall I would recommend this chocolate to chocolate people that love chocolate. I know that this is a fantastic product. I rate this Chocolate 4 Out of 5.

Our task to write a paragrahp about chocolate.
we Had to do a blind taste the Chocolate.
We are learning to write Paragrahp using Notes.
WALT use language that paints a picture in the mind of our reader.
Hope you enjoy my Writing.

Arbor Day Planting team

Walt: learn and use new vocab

Hello People,
The task was to Answer the questions about Arbor Day.
The WALT was Learn and Use New Vocab.
Hope you Enjoy my Blog post

Sulieti's Advice Blog

A week ago we had to Make a presention about James Abel and how he needed advice on which wach he should get a garmin and fit bit. so i think the fit bit is better because its reveiws and its video just hit heart.

Sulieti - Conjuctions

WALT:  We are learning about conjunctions and how to use them in sentences.

Conjuctions is when you join words like but or because in a middle of a sentences.

They are rich but they aren’t happy.

• We went home because we were tired.

• We went home early, so we missed the end of the concert.

• We went home when Jane wanted to.

• We went home before the concert ended.

• We went home after Max Jones had sung his first song.

• We went home although / though we did not really want to.

• We will go home if we are tired.

Task 2

Gene can go to school u he is not sick.

Lena has a sore foot since she played netball.

Katareina won't be going to the movies unless she cleans her room.

Sione can ride his bike only if he had a helmat.

Sally climbed a tree but she fell down.

Kyle walked home from school after the bell rang.

Simon was full from dinner because he ate all his dinner

Anna watched her sister only While her parents went to work.

Scott was in charge only if he got payed.

Shelley played ripper rugby although she tried her best.