Tuesday, 28 November 2017

Our very own made up nursery rhyme.

Humpty Dumpty was so ill, so Jack and Jill went up the hill, to grab the awesome doctor named Phil. But jack fell down and broke his crown, and Jill came tumbling after. Up got Jack and said to Jill wasn't it a Coincidence that we both fell down the hill.    

Humpty Dumpty sat on the wall but Jack n Jill pushed him off  and Humpty Dumpty had a great fall. Discreetly Jack and Jill had put Humpty's parts in the rubbish bin so they don't get caught. But accidentally Jill blurted out ”I can't believe we killed Humpty ”.   

All the king's horses and all the king’s men had just observed what Jill had said, they saw Humpty lying there dead. They pondered about what Jill had done well jack spun back to the dump and gathered Humpty’s pieces near a farm.

Jack had put Humpty back together again and took him to the King’s men, they gave back Jill and paid their bill and went on back to do their drill.

TASK: The task was to choose a well known nursery rhyme and using the same characters in the nursery we had to write alternative plot to the story. We also had to use these 5 words Coincidence, observed, blurted, discreetly and ponder in our writing.

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