Fear factor

WALT:  think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.

1. Introduction	Orientates and hooks
2. Body Paragraph 1	How our Teacher brought up Fear Factor. Don’t believe him.
3. Body Paragraph 2	The people that got Picked. Glad it wasn’t me/ They believe it’s real.
4. Body Paragraph 3	What happened, Thought it was Fake, Knew it was Fake, Just another one of Mr Goodwin’s Tricks.
5. Conclusion	What I think about the fear factor challenge

Plan of my paragraph topics

Welcome To Room 6’s Fear Factor, This Morning room 6 has been watching a youtube clip 4 Constants Has been up to Eating Frog eggs and river water But it was a race. But I think It might just be another one of Mr Goodwin Tricks.  If you Believe me or Not about it  Please Read on to Find Out More.

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