creative writing

Today in class we have been doing creative writing. We had to write a sentence about this picture. As a class we chose the sentence we liked to best and then added to it. Here is my sentence and the sentence I added to.

In the spring I was sitting in the middle of an Oak tree.


Under the oak tree,kicked back by the beach from a view,chill going down your spine, the bright sun light on you.   I can feel myself on a beach relaxing in the sun. I can hear the water going swith.