Super Speed

WALT: write effective paragraphs using juicy and exciting words.

If I had a superpower it would be super speed  I picked super speed because if i had to do my chores and run faster and can do it in 1 minute.  Read on to find out more about my super powers.

My ability is marvelous speed. I could do my chores and do my homework in 1 minutes. The feeling having super speed would be awesome because I wouldn't have to do my work for an hour or so. When my powers are used fuzzy is what people think when they try to look at me.

Families could be saved from crisis if there was a superhero. I could use my powers to save the world from crisis. Also to stop tunados from ruining the world. I could also save GI from danger as well.

Marked by Alisha 
I think having these powers are awesome because you could be remembered by a lot of people for what you Did. I also think that having powers would be cool but not just cool but awesome for me. Saving people would be awesome if i would use my powers.

Our task was to write a paragrah. We focase on One paragragh at a time. At the end My partner Alisha Marked My work by using a Rubric. I learnt how to write a sentences in 10 to 13 Mins. Also writing in silents. The reason i Put this flash logo is becausei was thinking off flash how he saved people. Please enjoy my writing.

My amazing Super Mario Writng

Walt: write effective paragraphs

Super Mario world is a fantastic game that is loved to play by a lot of people.  You can play on your chromebook or other electronic devices. The game goes side and as we call it Side scroller. The Aim for Super Mario World is not to collect stars or dodge the baddies,  But to pass each level. When you jump on the good mushrooms it makes you bigger and bigger to pass each level. The Baddies can kill you and the game could start the level again. Mario is the main player that plays in Super mario world. He is small,  Wears a red hat with a white M on top, He has a mustache plus He Italian, Wears overalls. What he does is he jumps a lot, Kills the baddies. He gets bigger and bigger when he jumps on mushrooms so he can break the walls. The only controls you need  to play the game is your keyboard. To move right use the right arrow, and to move left use the left arrow. In the game you will need to jump onto objects and to avoid enemies, to jump up use the up arrow. My advice is to wait on the green pipe tower so the little ugly enemies can go on the inside of you which you can then jump over, and then and jump again out of the way to safety. 9 out of 10 I would score the game . My Thoughts on this game is to play it because awesome and plus the player mario. I would recommend this game Super mario world  to you because it is a fun way to learn how to play.

This is a piece of writng about Super Mario World. I learnt how to write 3 to 4 paraghrags in 12 to 13 minutes. We also had to be silents.

Similes

We are learning Similes in room 6 with Miss Tito. If you dont know what Similes are it is the same things. Here is a presention about similes