what make an effective paragraph

In my group i have been thinking about i need to do to make an effective paragraph.Here is the rubric i'm going to use to reflect on my writing.

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Puctuation
1 Main idea
Juicy details
Make sense

Little red riding hood's map.

What make an effecrive sentence?

 To be a good friend you can ask them if she or he wants to play with you and your friends if they are sad or if they don't have any friends. you can be a good friend to them and don't mock them and push.

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Deatils		yes
Punctuation Capital letter, full stop,question mark speech mark			yes
Make sense			yes

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Deatils		yes
Punctuation Capital letter, full stop,question mark speech mark			yes
Make sencs			yes

Excersise Investagation

My Investigation

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How to use your W.I.T.S

At Pt England school we learn how to use our WITS everywhere in our school. W means you have to walk away.  If you get bullied at school then you can walk away.  I means you have to  Ignore it . It mean when ever you get mocked then ignore it.

Talk about it will help you sort out your problems. If you see someone fighting with someone then you can tell the teacher so they can talk about it. T means talk about it when you have problems.

S stands for seek help. when grown ups need help then they ask another grown up so they know what to do next time.when children get hurt then you can help them. It’s is good to know how to use your WITS so you know what to do .

Class Data

I predict that 1. girls like blue more then the boys.                 1. I found out that more girls like blue then
2.More boys have pet then girls.                                            green or purple.
3.There is only one girl like green then other girls.            2. I found out that There alot of kids have pet.
4.I girl like cats then the reat like dogs                             3. I did actually found out there was 1 girl did like
                                                                                       green.                                                                                                                                                          4. I found out that only one girl liked cats and the                                                                                                rest liked dogs