Kawau Island

Walt: summarise a week long experience into a recount.Swimming, Playing sports and going Kayaking, yeah i'm Talking about the Year 6’s going to Kawau island. The year 6 students from Pt England school went to Camp bentzon at Kawau Island. Let me tell you all about it. I was nervous because sailing was our first activity. Peter was our Instructor and also the man that runs the whole camp. He was talking about the instructions. Me, Vinolia, Chris, wesley and Hosea got picked to go solo and Talita and Htethtet went together. Me and Vinolia wanted to go together but peter said no. After Chris Demonstrated sailing for us we hopped in our Boats and went.Concourse was amazing because I conquered my fears. My Hand and Legs were shaking really hard. It was my second Favourite because I did different kinds of obstacles like walking on 1 rope with a harness.Kayaking was my 3rd favourite Activity because we went 3 miles from Camp Bentzon to the other Side. I wanted to stop but I had to keep going. I Fell in the middle of our kayaking trip and It was really hard to swim because instead of me going forwards I went backwards.The year 6 camp was So FUN and I  just wish I could go again. I really enjoyed spending time with everyone that was there.   This is my writing about going to Kawau. I learnt how to Write Recounts about where or what i have been doing. I wished that i could go Again.

My Intro

Walt: think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.

San Diego Zoo has lot’s of awesome animals. - Bungy Jumpers A virtual tour of a zoo is such a cool experience. - Hokey Pokeys I learnt a lot about animals from this website. - Paua Shells Virtual tours of a zoo isn’t as fun as a real zoo. - Whitebait fritters

Plan of my paragraph topics

1. Introduction	Orientates and hooks
2. Body Paragraph 1	Teacher Explained What we are going to do
3. Body Paragraph 2	Watching the Animals, explaining about how cool the Penguins were.
4. Body Paragraph 3	What will it be  like to go to San diego zoo.
5. Conclusion	What I think about the San Diego Zoo

Awesome Animals,Roaring and making loud Noises yeah i'm talking about the Zoo. I have been on a Virtual tour but It sucks because it is just not the same as the  real tour. If you want to find out more about this Please read on.

Many Animals at the zoo is just awesome but sometimes you would want to visit the zoo. This Week i have been on a Virtual Tour exploring other animals at San Diego zoo. Have you ever Been to San diego zoo or have just explored where there are awesome animals are?

This week we have been exploring Other Animal. We had to 

rewrite our Intro again. In our 

class we Had to write about San 

deigo zoo. 

Hope you like my Intro.