Re-Crafting and Deconstruct

WALT: deconstruct, and re-craft our paragraphs so they are more interesting for our readers.

Today our whole Literacy class did Writing. this is a presentation  we had to Paste our writing in so Everyone could give us feedback.In pairs we had to Deconstruct then Re-craft the introduction. 

Room 1 Is Awesome

This Year I'm in the Awesome Room 1, I was a Bit Nervous because I didn't really Know My teachers That much. Being in Room 1 for the last 2  weeks was so Cool.  What im looking Forward to is Tech and Being in Mr Wiseman Class.  For The last 2 Weeks I have learn to get use to how they do things around Here in the Yr 7 & 8. For Literacy im in Mrs Ilaoa class and For Maths im in Mr wiseman class. It is My First Year here in intermediate and im having New Friends.